peer feedback/ comments 1
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PEER COMMENT FORM
Topic: learning log
meeting 1-15
Commentator: Wiwi Nur Afriani ( 2088203090)
Assessing:
- My learning language logs
(of the meeting materials)
Elaborate each meeting (meeting
1,2,3,4,5,6, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, and 14) of the learning language logs in
sentences.
- My synopsis (of the meeting
materials)
Elaborate each meeting (meeting
1,2,3,4,5,6, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, and 14) of the synopsis in sentences.
- My Reflections (of the
meeting materials)
Elaborate each meeting (meeting
1,2,3,4,5,6, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, and 14) of the reflections in sentences.
- My learning strategies (of
the meeting materials)
Elaborate each meeting (meeting
1,2,3,4,5,6, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, and 14) of the learning strategies in
sentences.
- My news writings (articles)
mechanics (Give the link of your friend’s news writing blog)
Elaborate each element mechanic in sentences based on this table.
My news writings
(articles) mechanics https://goldielog.blogspot.com/?m=1
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Assessing Mechanics |
Outstanding |
Strong |
Adequate |
Minimal |
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Spelling |
You have demonstrated an excellent understanding of mechanics,
demonstrating accurate and precise spelling throughout your work. 90 for
score |
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Grammar |
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You have demonstrated a
reasonable understanding of grammatical rules and structures in your writing.
78 for score |
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Punctuation/Mark |
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good i give her 85 for score |
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Complete sentences |
Your writing features perfect
grammar, precise spelling, accurate punctuation and well-structured
sentences. 90 for score |
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Correct use of
capitalization |
You consistently capitalize
where necessary, such as at the beginning of a sentence, for proper nouns,
and in titles. |
My news writings
(articles) https://goldielog.blogspot.com/?m=1
Elaborate each element contents of news writing in sentences based on
this table.
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Assessing Ideas
& Content of the News |
Outstanding |
Strong |
Adequate |
Minimal |
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Well-stated topic
sentence in the headline |
The topic sentence in the title
is strong and well stated. It effectively captures the main idea of a news
article in a concise and attention grabbing manner. 80 for score |
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Well-stated author
in by line |
The byline adequately serves
its purpose in acknowledging the author, but there is room for improvement in
providing more comprehensive information. |
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Use a logical plan
(4w+h) in the lead. |
The seamless integration of
4W+H into leads contributes to the overall coherence and effectiveness of the
news article, making it engaging and informative from the start. |
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Existed quotation
with correct capitalization, grammar, & mark |
Quotations are accurately
enclosed in quotation marks, and capitalization and grammar are applied
correctly, making it easy to identify and understand quoted material. |
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Well-ended with
insightful messages to the viewers/readers |
it effectively conveys a deep
message to the viewers/readers. The ending leaves a lasting impression and
offers a valuable conclusion for the viewer to ponder. 79 for score |
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A pretty good flow
of ideas from topic sentence to details in sequence |
The writing follows a logical
sequence, where each detail builds on the previous one, creating a cohesive
and well-structured work. 85 for score |
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