peer feedback/ comments 2
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PEER COMMENT FORM
Topic: learning log
meeting 1-15
Commentator: Wiwi Nur Afriani (2088203090)
Assessing:
- My learning language logs
(of the meeting materials)
Elaborate each meeting (meeting
1,2,3,4,5,6, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, and 14) of the learning language logs in
sentences.
- My synopsis (of the meeting
materials)
Elaborate each meeting (meeting
1,2,3,4,5,6, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, and 14) of the synopsis in sentences.
- My Reflections (of the
meeting materials)
Elaborate each meeting (meeting
1,2,3,4,5,6, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, and 14) of the reflections in sentences.
- My learning strategies (of
the meeting materials)
Elaborate each meeting (meeting
1,2,3,4,5,6, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, and 14) of the learning strategies in
sentences.
- My news writings (articles)
mechanics (Give the link of your friend’s news writing blog)
Elaborate each element mechanic in sentences based on this table.
My news writings
(articles) mechanics https://urberrys.blogspot.com/
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Assessing Mechanics |
Outstanding |
Strong |
Adequate |
Minimal |
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Spelling |
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Your writing is clear and easy to understand. Your use of proper
spelling shows attention to detail and professionalism. 85 for score |
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Grammar |
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There are a few minor areas
where improvement could be made, but overall, your grammar is adequate.75 for
score |
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Punctuation/Mark |
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You demonstrate a reasonable grasp of grammar, spelling, and punctuation,
allowing your writing to be coherent and understandable.78 for score |
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Complete sentences |
You've demonstrated a high
level of proficiency in conveying your ideas effectively through your
writing. 90 for score |
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Correct use of
capitalization |
You have a keen eye for knowing when and where to capitalize, which
adds a professional and polished touch to your writing. |
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My news writings
(articles) contents https://urberrys.blogspot.com/
Elaborate each element contents of news writing in sentences based on
this table.
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Assessing Ideas
& Content of the News |
Outstanding |
Strong |
Adequate |
Minimal |
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Well-stated topic
sentence in the headline |
Your ability to convey the core message of the news in a brief and
engaging manner is commendable.80 for score |
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Well-stated author
in by line |
Your byline does an excellent job of clearly identifying the author of
the news article.80 for score |
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Use a logical plan
(4w+h) in the lead. |
Always using this rules, good for her 95 for score |
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Existed quotation
with correct capitalization, grammar, & mark |
Your news article includes an
existed quotation with correct capitalization, grammar, and punctuation, and
it is strong! 84 for score |
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Well-ended with
insightful messages to the viewers/readers |
The ending of your news article
is adequate, with some insightful messages to the viewers/readers. 75 for
score |
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A pretty good flow
of ideas from topic sentence to details in sequence |
Your news article demonstrates
an outstanding flow of ideas, from the topic sentence to the supporting
details presented in a logical sequence. 90 for score |
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